The tells are very good overall, but I'm not a fan of the forced thinks. I know there's an argument of "the condition causes invasive thoughts" but being dictatorial about how a person's (even sick) internal thoughts might sound is not a particularly great idea since it kind of challenges the player's agency in a way that I think will get people to just gradually ignore them over time.
I'd recommend adjusting the forced thoughts to be more tells that are kinesthetic in nature. Readout shenanigans, more fixations on ordered technological stuff, more warped anti-flesh pattern recognitions. These are great since they give people hooks to emote their own responses off to, especially when there's so many.